Score: 10

"Incredible!"

submission: The Spirit of Halloween 1

date: November 26, 2006

Wow. First let me say that I have never before liked a Flash animation so much that I actually did a mental analysis of the characters. This is just a beautiful flash, and so funny! You've got a really good premise going, here, and I ADORE KIMBLES! Cute and fluffy and a DDR slavedriver! CHING!

At the end of the Flash, I actually said, "Hey! That's it?" But then I realised that it was several minutes long and that it probably took a few months to create. But still -- THAT'S IT? I swear to God, this thing is like potato chips. We can't have just one!

Score: 9

"Heh..."

submission: ANIMATION INVASION

date: November 23, 2006

It was interesting. Though I must admit, it got a bit "Treasure Island"-esque at certain points.

Good though. I'm loving your hair. The acting gave the first Godzilla movies a run for their money; utterly classic. Fantastic job.

Score: 8

"Good, with a few hitches."

submission: Grimly Manor trailer

date: October 30, 2006

Overall, I thought this flash was a good one. I loved the animation; it was fantastic, and the storyline was great. However, I had a few problems.

The first problem was the ingénue's expression. It stayed relatively the same, even as she saw the man blow his brains out. I don't know about her, but I would have screamed bloody murder at such a sight. If she was supposed to be staying so stoic, I would recommend making it more obvious (i.e., looking distinctly bored or stony).

The second problem was the little boy. What happened to him? He showed up at the beginning then seemed to disappear...

But other than that, excellent. I loko forward to seeing more of this!